Two Word Tuesday: Precisely and Cinder Baby Excerpt

Two Word Tuesday: Precisely and Cinder Baby Excerpt
January 2, 2018 No Comments » Blog Amanda Hester

Today I am sharing a small peek into my Short Story, “Cinder Baby.” Which includes this week’s Two Word Tuesday word prompt precisely. You can read all the rules below my excerpt and you can join in here.

This week’s word choices are: Sharp and/or Precisely


Cindy sighed. Mother had only forced her to come to this ball in the hopes of pawning her off on the horrid Prince Stefan. Prince Charming they called him with a snicker. With Cindy married off Mother would be free of her deathbed promise to Father. Finally, Mother and her girls could return to their family’s kingdom, far beyond the reach of this ghastly patriarchy. Her stepsisters would be here tonight as well, but they had been coached on how to avoid the prince. Dru had gone so far as to cut her right cheek repeatedly, allowing the tissue to scar until it was grotesque. Annie, sweet as she was, had no need to disfigure herself.

Cindy made her way down with caution, balancing on the ridiculous glass slippers Mother’s sister, Azura, had given her. Her doting godmother. More like, her devilmother. Cindy snorted, very unladylike. Azura had used forbidden black magic to produce a carriage as well. The carriage glimmered like diamonds but Cindy could see remnants of the magic writhing at the edges.

Azura had staged whispered to Mother, “The magic will escape by midnight precisely, surely he will have her in his bed then.”

Mother nodded in agreement and Cindy wondered where “escaped” black magic went.

Resolving once again to hide in the shadows until this fiasco was over, Cindy descended the rest of the steps. Candlelight reflected from a nearby mirror and blinded her momentarily. She had barely regained her bearings when he grabbed her hand and swept her onto the dance floor.

What to do:

  1. Write in any genre – fiction, memoir, poetry, horror, mystery, fantasy, romance, YA – you get the idea.
  2. You must use one or both prompts in your story – any form, any tense, as long as it is grammatically correct. (For instance, if you’re given a noun, and can use it as an adjective by adding “ing,” or change it to an adverb with “ly,”  that is allowed.)
  3. Share the URL to your story in the comments OR, if you don’t have your own blog, share your story in the comments.
  4. Please keep your stories PG-13 or under, and be sparing with the swearing. This is a family-friendly kind of place. Please include trigger warnings where needed.

This week’s words are:

Sharp and/or Precisely

[adv] in a sudden or abrupt way; in exact terms; without vagueness.

The deadline to submit a story is midnight Monday, CST (5 a.m. Sunday, GMT)

Until next time, scribe happy and stay sassy!

Blessed be,





Amanda Mabry is one of the founders of OWS and their Executive Marketing Director. If you haven’t already, be sure to visit her Patreon page for a dark and stormy walk through the park of her imagination. New stories are posted monthly along with playlists, polls, and more. You can read her supernatural thriller, Next Best Seller, in Tales From Our Write Side and her poetry in Ambrosia both available on Amazon.

About The Author
Amanda Hester Amanda Hester is currently working on several projects, including a short story collection, Darker Daze: The Storms Within and the first book in her Chthonian Guardian, Soul Purge, which will be published in early 2016. She has a sci-fi project in the works, Vivamus, which will be released early in 2017.
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    Heather Downes

    That is extremely dark, and a great take on the story. LM x


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